tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post3980584302274874245..comments2023-10-30T12:00:57.306+00:00Comments on Romancing the blog . . . Fun-Writing Blog: "Shh It's a Secret" - Summer's BlogfestFrancine Howarthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-66869854716440778042010-09-25T19:20:18.236+01:002010-09-25T19:20:18.236+01:00Very suspenseful entry! Is Andy OK? And what is th...Very suspenseful entry! Is Andy OK? And what is the secret good news? Well done!J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-52203937900525982692010-09-20T08:52:17.358+01:002010-09-20T08:52:17.358+01:00It didn't need the picture. The imagery was v...It didn't need the picture. The imagery was vivid without it. So much violence; it was unexpected, but a pleasure to read.<br /><br />I have an award for you over at my blog.<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-57267600008661261282010-09-19T13:35:01.187+01:002010-09-19T13:35:01.187+01:00Hi girls,
Thanks so much for dropping by to comme...Hi girls,<br /><br />Thanks so much for dropping by to comment! I love these blogfests. They're such a great way of reading others' written works.<br /><br />Yes L'Aussie - knowledge of weaponry here. If I say Purdey, Browning, and pump-action etc., I know what I'm talking about and that does come in handy for my writing!<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-81305959924424863672010-09-19T06:12:16.191+01:002010-09-19T06:12:16.191+01:00Sorry I'm late. And what's this business o...Sorry I'm late. And what's this business of no images? I must have skimmed over that part(clearly, as I've used an image with my post).<br /><br />This is great. I can feel the urgency of the situation. Nice visuals too. I can see her running, scarring her body along the way. <br /><br />Fav paragraph: "Brambles tore at flesh, skin zinging from nettle stings as she sped onward. Sharde(Shar-day)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15745932159705284821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-60465909818367695802010-09-19T02:37:24.754+01:002010-09-19T02:37:24.754+01:00Ooh, bad Summer. I like images! But as Clarissa sa...Ooh, bad Summer. I like images! But as Clarissa said, even without, you painted a picture, one with particularly English motifs. A little bit of knowledge of guns etc there I see. Great atmosphere Francine..:) Of course, I missed this blogfest..:(Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-85865658726364959422010-09-18T12:11:02.742+01:002010-09-18T12:11:02.742+01:00Wonderful entry Francine and you did paint the pic...Wonderful entry Francine and you did paint the picture of her emotions so well, thanks for stopping by and following as i have liked your blog and followed you back. :)<br /><br />Wild Rose~Wild Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05260455210731142858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-49333933396268399122010-09-18T04:49:13.541+01:002010-09-18T04:49:13.541+01:00Great entry! Very easy to read. I think you did ve...Great entry! Very easy to read. I think you did very well on the atmosphere without an image.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-89251019560917032762010-09-18T02:49:03.221+01:002010-09-18T02:49:03.221+01:00Well done! The language is different but it works ...Well done! The language is different but it works well in this scene. Great use of the secret prompt.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-71965279544776059822010-09-17T17:03:42.555+01:002010-09-17T17:03:42.555+01:00Nice writing Francine. I agree, you gave us the im...Nice writing Francine. I agree, you gave us the image with your words, which is how you're supposed to do. Great job. (I think I know her secret!)Wendy Tyler Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10841984342368861282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-63693468267904675552010-09-17T14:26:00.360+01:002010-09-17T14:26:00.360+01:00Great Entry....ooohh I missed the part about the i...Great Entry....ooohh I missed the part about the instructions of no pics, min's got a pic...sorry Summer :(<br /><br />I think the piece is very vivid, and the premise quite exciting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-18248893796685596052010-09-17T14:09:20.275+01:002010-09-17T14:09:20.275+01:00The emotions in here are very good. You have wonde...The emotions in here are very good. You have wonderful imagery to go along with it. I think you did beautifully without the picture. Just your writing gave it all the atmosphere it needed. Great post!Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4233495210852135611.post-62755093614706908092010-09-17T13:55:45.373+01:002010-09-17T13:55:45.373+01:00Even without the photo. I got a clear picture in m...Even without the photo. I got a clear picture in my mind. I think her emotions of not wanting to see and needing to see came across well. Great clip.<br /><br />CDAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12160669603997465454noreply@blogger.com